Did you grow up with pets in your home?
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Hi Eva,
It’s interesting to hear about your background with livestock and how views on pets have changed over time. It sounds like, growing up, animals like dogs were seen more as working animals rather than pets. It’s understandable that you might have a different perspective on keeping animals inside the house compared to others who have grown up with pets. Everyone has their own experiences and preferences when it comes to animals, and it’s great that you’re able to express yours clearly. Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Cathy
I grew up without pets.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I didn’t grow up with pets.
But we kept a lot of livestock.
>>CORRECT
OR>>But we had a lot of livestock.
For example we kept cows chickens and dogs.
>>For example, we kept cows, chickens, and dogs.
We didn\'t think that dog is pet.
>>We didn\'t think that a dog was a pet.
We thank that dog was just dog.
>>We thought that a dog was just a dog.
When I was child we didn\'t have idea about pet.
>>When I was a child, we didn\'t have any idea what pets were.
Ouly we are accepted livestock or anlmal.
>>We only accepted livestock or animals.
Lately a lot of people likes pets.
>>Lately, a lot of people like pets.
Out country is increasd people who live with pets.
>>Our country has seen an increase in people who live with pets.
But l don\'t like that animal live in the house.
>>But I don\'t like animals living in the house.
I think that animal have to live outside the house.
>>I think that animals have to live outside the house.
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