Did you have a fun?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Sally,
This is my composition.
Did you have a fun?
Yes, I am glad to meet my parents, brother, sister.
Did you have to travel very long?
No, I travel for only 2 hours.
Even if today's lesson is only four minutes, I feel studying very much.
See you later~~~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^-^ Happy Monday! :D See you later!
-Teacher Sally ;)
Here are my corrections:
Hello Sally,
>>Correct ^-^
This is my composition.
>>Correct ^-^
Did you have a fun?
>> Did you have fun?
Yes, I am glad to meet my parents, brother, sister.
>> Yes, I am glad to meet my parents, brother, and sister.
Did you have to travel very long?
>> Correct ^-^
No, I travel for only 2 hours.
>> Correct ^-^
Even if today's lesson is only four minutes, I feel studying very much.
>> Even if today's lesson is only about four minutes, I feel that I want to study more.
See you later~~~
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