Did you have a fun?

2011-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Sally, This is my composition. Did you have a fun? Yes, I am glad to meet my parents, brother, sister. Did you have to travel very long? No, I travel for only 2 hours. Even if today's lesson is only four minutes, I feel studying very much. See you later~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^-^ Happy Monday! :D See you later!

-Teacher Sally ;)

Here are my corrections:

Hello Sally,
>>Correct ^-^
This is my composition.
>>Correct ^-^
Did you have a fun?
>> Did you have fun?
Yes, I am glad to meet my parents, brother, sister.

>> Yes, I am glad to meet my parents, brother, and sister.

Did you have to travel very long?

>> Correct ^-^
No, I travel for only 2 hours.
>> Correct ^-^
Even if today's lesson is only four minutes, I feel studying very much.
>> Even if today's lesson is only about four minutes, I feel that I want to study more.
See you later~~~

>>Correct ^-^

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