Did you have a hairstyle a long time ago that you think is embarras[이름]g now?

2023-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Yes I did. It\'s called Antenna hair. And I make an additional remark, I got a part of my antenna hair dyed like a red, yellow , and green. I don\'t know why it was famous at that time. I just followed my friend. Also, it pushes me embarrassed now as time goes. But you know, there is saying in Korea. what goes around comes around. :)

강사 첨삭

Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Yes I did.

>> CORRECT!

It\'s called Antenna hair.

>> CORRECT!

And I make an additional remark, I got a part of my antenna hair dyed like a red, yellow , and green.

>> And I make an additional remark, I got a part of my antenna hair dyed in red, yellow, and green.

I don\'t know why it was famous at that time.

>> CORRECT!

I just followed my friend.

>> CORRECT!

Also, it pushes me embarrassed now as time goes.

>> Also, it pushed me to feel embarrassed about it now as time goes.

But you know, there is saying in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

What goes around comes around. :)

>> CORRECT!

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