Did you have a sweet sensible day?

2010-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 June

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Good evening! Joanna! How do you do? I had a day off, because I got one day vacation from my company! But end of the day is coming up so fast,oh no!, If you ask me what did you do, I slept all day . So I started feeling sad and still tired!! However,good thing today, after one day, the weekend is coming! I'm so happy! Do you think so? Thank you for the advising for effective ways to learn English!! I,m going to do my best to do it! and then I'm planing to find a friend who is also learning English! I also watched movie " IRON MAN 2 and listen to, "Because of you" ? Can you recomend carrie underwood song for me? I saw her face on web site! I think she looks like kerry clerkson! Ok , I,m waiting for your call on Friday! See you then!

강사 첨삭

Hi dear Martin! I’m glad to know that you are going to do the ways to learn English. Do it with fun! I'll talk to you tomorrow. Haja!   Good evening! Joanna! How do you do?>>>correctI had a day off, because I got one day vacation from my company! >>>correctBut the end of the day is coming up so fast, oh no!,  >>>okay If you ask me what did you do, I slept all day. >>>okay >>>If you will ask me, What did you do?? I say, I slept all day.So I started feeling sad and still tired!! >>>okayHowever,good thing today, after one day, the weekend is coming!I'm so happy! Do you think so? >>>However, the good thing after this day is the weekend. I'm so happy! >>>Don’t you think so? >>>What do you think?Thank you for the advising for effective ways to learn English!! >>>Thank you for your advice on effective ways to learn English!I,m going to do my best to do it! >>>I’m going to do my best in doing it!and then I'm planing to find a friend who is also learning English! >>>And now I am planning to find a friend who is also learning English. >>>And now I am planning to look for a friend whom I can practice the language with.I also watched movie " IRON MAN 2 and listen to, "Because of you" ? >>I also watched the movie, "IRON MAN 2" and listened to "Because of You". Can you recomend carrie underwood song for me? >>>Can you recommend some Carrie Underwood songs for me? >>>capital letters always need to be used for titles and proper names.I saw her face on web site! I think she looks like kerry clerkson! >>>I saw her photo on a certain website. I think she looks like Kelly Clarkson!Ok , I,m waiting for your call on Friday! See you then! >>>Okay then. I will be waiting for your call on Friday! See you! >>>Okay. I will wait for your call on Friday! See you then!

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