Did you like studying history at school?

2020-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I really wanted to good at history when I was a high school student but I didn\'t. I think it is because I was not that good at memorize about history. Honestly, I was not that bad at memorizing something in other subjects but especially at history, I felt seriously difficult to memorize all things like dates or incidents. As a result, I didn\'t get any high scores on history and it led me not to enjoy studying history anymore. So, at that time I was really sad about it:(

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] Ah! I think that we have our own strengths that could be different from others. I am certain that you tried your best. Keep doing your best!~~T.Dee

I really wanted to good at history when I was a high school student but I didn\'t. 
>>I really wanted to be good at history when I was a high school student but I didn\'t. 
I think it is because I was not that good at memorize about history. 
>>I think it is because I was not that good at memorizing facts related to history.
Honestly, I was not that bad at memorizing something in other subjects but especially at history, 
>>Honestly, I was not that bad at memorizing something in other subjects except at History.
I felt seriously difficult to memorize all things like dates or incidents. 
>>I seriously had a difficulty memorizimh all things like dates or incidents.
As a result, I didn\'t get any high scores on history and it led me not to enjoy studying history anymore.
>>As a result, I didn\'t get any high scores in History and it led me not to enjoy studying History anymore.
So, at that time I was really sad about it:( 
>>CORRECT!

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