Did you see "Harry Potter"? Which part do you like the most in the movie?(ANSWER)

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HOMEWORK:

Did you see \"Harry Potter\"? Which part do you like the most in the movie?

Please answer in complete sentences. 

YOUR ANSWER:

Um.... I didn \'t see \"Harry Potter\". :(
But I saw only front part.
And, I now the part that the main character goes through the wall with cart.
I saw that part at You Tube. It was fantastic!
Also, It was mysterious.
I want to do that too.
And the magic school was really grand.
As a result, my favorite part in \"Harry Potter\" movie is
the part that the magic schol is appeared with the mysterious clouds.

CORRECTIONS:

Um.... I didn’t see \"Harry Potter\". :(
But, I saw only front part.
And, I now the part that the main character goes through the wall with cart.
I saw that part at You Tube. It was fantastic!
Also, It was mysterious.
I want to do that, too.
And the magic school was really grand.
As a result, my favorite part in \"Harry Potter\" movie is
the part that the magic school appeared with the mysterious clouds.

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