Did your parents read to you as a child? Did you have a favorite story? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite story title is \"gold hatchet, silver hatchet.\" This story that one of the woodcutter was working there to have iron hatchet. However, he was falling into the pond. while he was crying, suddenly a gray-haired old man appreared from the pond. he had to gold hatchet , silver hatchet. and he said, \"Is it yours?\". and woodcutter said, \"No, I\'m not.\" the old man was impressive to honest him. So, the old man gave to three hatchet. gold,silver and iron hatchet. it is famous to another woodcutters. so they went to the pond and deliberately drop their hatchets. the old man appeared again. and he asked to same question. but they said, \"That is mine!\". the old man became aware to lie. finally, he is so feel disgraceful that was not give all of the hatchets. The story of moral is when you have to behavior honest, To get the profit whenever.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Clara. I had a great time reading your essay. It was like reading the story myself. Thank you for this. It was definitely a treat. Let\'s talk about this tomorrow in class. See you then ~ teacher Jane ^___^
My favorite story title is \"gold hatchet, silver hatchet.\"
>>> The title of my favorite story is \"Gold Hatchet, Silver Hatchet.\"
This story that one of the woodcutter was working there to have iron hatchet.
>>> This story is about a woodcutter who was working on an iron hatchet.
However, he was falling into the pond.
>>> However, while working, he was about to fall into the pond.
While he was crying, suddenly a gray-haired old man appreared from the pond.
>>> While he was crying, suddenly, a gray-haired old man appeared from the pond.
he had to gold hatchet , silver hatchet.
>>> He had a gold hatchet and a silver hatchet.
and he said, \"Is it yours?\".
>>> Then he said, \"Are these yours?\"
and woodcutter said, \"No, I\'m not.\"
>>> And the woodcutter said, \"No, they aren\'t.\"
the old man was impressive to honest him.
>>> The old man was impressed with his honesty.
So, the old man gave to three hatchet.
>>> So the old man gave him three hatchets.
gold,silver and iron hatchet.
>>> Gold, silver, and iron hatchets.
it is famous to another woodcutters.
>>> It spread to other woodcutters.
so they went to the pond and deliberately drop their hatchets.
>>> So they went to the pond and deliberately dropped their hatchets.
the old man appeared again. and he asked to same question.
>>> The old man appeared and asked them the same question.
but they said, \"That is mine!\".
>>> But they said, \"That is mine!\"
the old man became aware to lie.
>>> The old man is aware of their lie.
finally, he is so feel disgraceful that was not give all of the hatchets.
>>> Finally, he felt disgrace that he did not give all of the hatchets.
The story of moral is when you have to behavior honest, To get the profit whenever.
>>> The moral of the story is when you behave honestly, you will get a reward for it.
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