diet
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I am not confident doing intermittent fasting.
I don\'t want to endure hunger that so much.
I don\'t want to go ona diet that is too hard to me.
A Ketogenic diet is not attractive to me.
I think a diet should not hard trainning course but keep as a kind of good habit.
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Hi there Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sharing. Like you, many people are having a had time doing this. But for some other people they do fasting with various reasons.
Stay well and healthy!
Aki ~~
I am not confident doing intermittent fasting.
>>> I am not confident of doing intermittent fasting.
I don\'t want to endure hunger that so much.
>>> I don\'t want to endure hunger that much.
I don\'t want to go on a diet that is too hard to me.
>>> I don\'t want to go on a diet that is too hard for me.
A Ketogenic diet is not attractive to me.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> A Ketogenic diet is not appealing to me.
I think a diet should not hard trainning course but keep as a kind of good habit.
>>> I think a diet should not be a hard training course but keep as a kind of good habit.
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