dieting
학생이 쓴 원문
One of the reasons of excessive dieting might be low self -esteem.
If we should perceive other\'s sight and trends, our daily life are unstable and nervous..
Low-esteem make us timid.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
I completely agree that basing our lives on other people’s perceptions can lower our confidence. We need to train our minds to recognize that we are all different, and that each of us is unique in our own special way.
T. Aki~
One of the reasons of excessive dieting might be low self -esteem.
>>> One of the reasons for excessive dieting might be low self-esteem.
If we should perceive other\'s sight and trends, our daily life are unstable and nervous..
>>> If we perceive others\' opinions and trends, our daily lives become unstable and stressful.
Low-esteem make us timid.
>> Having a low self- esteem makes us timid.
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