Diets are useful to some degree.
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These days, diets are common.
Doing diets fiercely isn\'t good for health.
On the other hand, some people do diets for their health.
For example, people who are obesity need diets.
So, I think that it depends on the purposes.
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Try to focus on the content.
It should always be quality over quantity.
Try to give specific examples to prove your point.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
These days, diets are common.
>> Correct
Doing diets fiercely isn\'t good for health.
>> Taking diets too seriously isn\'t good for health.
On the other hand, some people do diets for their health.
>> However, there are some kinds of diet that are good for health.
For example, people who are obesity need diets.
>> For example, obese people need to go on a diet.
So, I think that it depends on the purposes.
>> I think it all depends on your goals.
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