Differenced between the western sedding and Korea weddig

2015-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Today, I would like to talk about the wedding culture between Korea and Western. I have a chance to preside a wedding ceremony in English and in Korea. Because the broom was Filipino and the bride was chinese and most of guests were Korean and various countries. Major differences between the western wedding and Korean wedding was the atmosphere. I was impressed with my friend's wedding atmosphere. The wedding atmosphere was very freely and it was not tied by regular form. The groom and the bride confess their love each others love freely during the wedding. And another interesting was about wedding confirmation document.

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Today, I would like to talk about the wedding culture between Korea and Western. 

>> Today, I would like to talk about the wedding culture between Korea and the Western countries. 
 I have a chance to preside a wedding ceremony in English and in Korea.

>>  I have a chance to preside the wedding ceremony in English and in Korean. 

Because the broom was Filipino and the bride was chinese and most of guests were Korean and various countries.
>> Because the groom is a Filipino and the bride is a Chinese, and most of the guests were Koreans and from other countries.
Major differences between the western wedding and Korean wedding was the atmosphere.
>> The atmosphere  was the major difference between the Korean and the Western weddings.
I was impressed with my friend\'s wedding atmosphere.

>> correct!
 The wedding atmosphere was very freely and it was not tied by regular form. 

>> The wedding\'s atmosphere was very free and it was not tied in the regular form.
 The groom and the bride confess their love each others love freely during the wedding.
>>  The groom and the bride confessed their love to each other freely during the wedding.
And another interesting was about wedding confirmation document.

>> And another interesting thing was about the wedding confirmation document.

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