Differenced between the western sedding and Korea weddig
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Today, I would like to talk about the wedding culture between Korea and Western.
>> Today, I would like to talk about the wedding culture between Korea and the Western countries.
I have a chance to preside a wedding ceremony in English and in Korea.
>> I have a chance to preside the wedding ceremony in English and in Korean.
Because the broom was Filipino and the bride was chinese and most of guests were Korean and various countries.
>> Because the groom is a Filipino and the bride is a Chinese, and most of the guests were Koreans and from other countries.
Major differences between the western wedding and Korean wedding was the atmosphere.
>> The atmosphere was the major difference between the Korean and the Western weddings.
I was impressed with my friend\'s wedding atmosphere.
>> correct!
The wedding atmosphere was very freely and it was not tied by regular form.
>> The wedding\'s atmosphere was very free and it was not tied in the regular form.
The groom and the bride confess their love each others love freely during the wedding.
>> The groom and the bride confessed their love to each other freely during the wedding.
And another interesting was about wedding confirmation document.
>> And another interesting thing was about the wedding confirmation document.
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