Different thought
학생이 쓴 원문
What other facts do you know about autism?
I think Autism is very difficult disease in the world. Because of about our brain.
Disease of brain always difficult to us at past or prent.
I think about recognition.
An autistic child think only ones. But, they do not think many things. but, their\'s skill appeare
One parts.
At drawing. I saw a child at long time ago.
He had fill only line than color.
And he drew a line only. But, his thought was
Create and it appeared through the line only.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I think Autism is very difficult disease in the world. Because of about our brain.
>>> I think Autism is a very difficult disease in the world because it affects our brain.
Disease of brain always difficult to us at past or prent.
>>> Disease of the brain has always been difficult to us in the past or present.
I think about recognition.
I think about recognition.
>>> correct
An autistic child think only ones.
An autistic child think only ones.
>>> An autistic child think only one thing at a time.
But, they do not think many things. but, their\'s skill appeare One parts.
>>> They do not think of many things but their skill and ability excel in one thing.
At drawing. I saw a child at long time ago.
At drawing. I saw a child at long time ago.
>>> At drawing class, I saw a child a long time ago.
He had fill only line than color. And he drew a line only.
He had fill only line than color. And he drew a line only.
>>> He had only filled lines than colors and he drew only a line.
But, his thought was Create and it appeared through the line only
>>> But, his thought was created and it appeared through the line only.
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