Difficult decision that i had ever

2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I’m making a difficult decision now about my job career. Of course, I thank God cause I’m working and belonging company. I’m in distribution company now, But I’m not sure of that how long do I stay in this job position. The Market situation is changing any time, So I don’t see my self working in the long run in this company. Industry 4.0 is coming to us. In usual, That means Influence on some industries. And Distribution industry is including that Effects. So I convey you the opinion that I’m in the time that agonize about my future career. But I’m not worry about that seriously. Because any industry has a regular cycle that moving between Good and bad condition. My company is working well and supposing to do M&A. Hard time comes to me any time, So That doesn’t matter.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름] for sharing this.

Everyone experiences a difficult times in their life. There are moments when we have to make difficult decisions. I hope you\'ll make the right one.

Talk to you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^, 


I’m making a difficult decision now about my job career.

>>> I\'m making a difficult decision now about my job / career.
Of course, I thank God cause I’m working and belonging company.

>>> Of course, I thank GOD because I\'m working in a company.
I’m in distribution company now, But I’m not sure of that how long do I stay in this job position.

>>> I\'m in in a distribution company now. But I am not sure how long I will stay in this job position.
The Market situation is changing any time, So I don’t see my self working in the long run in this company.

>>> The market\'s situation is changing every time. So, I don\'t see myself working in this company in the long run.


Industry 4.0 is coming to us.

>>> Correct!

In usual, That means Influence on some industries.

>>> Normally, that affects some industries.

And Distribution industry is including that Effects.

>>> And the distribution industry is included in those which are affected.  

So I convey you the opinion that I’m in the time that agonize about my future career. 

>>> So, I want to tell you that I am in a situation where I\'m deeply thinking about my future career.

But I’m not worry about that seriously.

>>> But I don\'t worry about that seriously.

Because any industry has a regular cycle that moving between Good and bad condition.

>>> Because any industry has ups and downs.

My company is working well and supposing to do M&A.

>>> My company is working well and is expected to have do M&A.

Hard time comes to me any time, So That doesn’t matter.

>>> Hard times may come to me any time, so that doesn\'t matter.

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