Difficult decision that i had ever
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Everyone experiences a difficult times in their life. There are moments when we have to make difficult decisions. I hope you\'ll make the right one.
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I’m making a difficult decision now about my job career.
>>> I\'m making a difficult decision now about my job / career.
Of course, I thank God cause I’m working and belonging company.
>>> Of course, I thank GOD because I\'m working in a company.
I’m in distribution company now, But I’m not sure of that how long do I stay in this job position.
>>> I\'m in in a distribution company now. But I am not sure how long I will stay in this job position.
The Market situation is changing any time, So I don’t see my self working in the long run in this company.
>>> The market\'s situation is changing every time. So, I don\'t see myself working in this company in the long run.
Industry 4.0 is coming to us.
>>> Correct!
In usual, That means Influence on some industries.
>>> Normally, that affects some industries.
And Distribution industry is including that Effects.
>>> And the distribution industry is included in those which are affected.
So I convey you the opinion that I’m in the time that agonize about my future career.
>>> So, I want to tell you that I am in a situation where I\'m deeply thinking about my future career.
But I’m not worry about that seriously.
>>> But I don\'t worry about that seriously.
Because any industry has a regular cycle that moving between Good and bad condition.
>>> Because any industry has ups and downs.
My company is working well and supposing to do M&A.
>>> My company is working well and is expected to have do M&A.
Hard time comes to me any time, So That doesn’t matter.
>>> Hard times may come to me any time, so that doesn\'t matter.
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