Digging for garlic
학생이 쓴 원문
I went back to farming.
So I digged up some garlic with my friends.
It was very hard.
But It was amazing and rewarding.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for dropping by the board, Ms. [이름]!
You sure had enjoyed harvesting garlic with your friends. Keep your compositions coming!
~Teacher Eunice
I went back to farming.
>>> I went farming.
So I digged up some garlic with my friends.
>>> I dug up some garlic with my friends.
It was very hard.
But It was amazing and rewarding.
>>> It was very hard, but It was amazing and rewarding.
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