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Some people seemmto confuse the future education and the digital technology.
The role and influence of digital and analog types have different in education.
Of course young generation should be learn how to use digital technology for their future life.
But at the same time they need to learn how to feel emotions, how to communicate with others.
AI and digital texybooks can\'t teach young students these things.
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Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
That is also my point. I really appreciate it when you frankly write your thoughts. I really wonder why the Ministry of education proposed this policy and some educators too agreed on this part. They should have asked your perspective and not the opinion of a university professor because we know there is a big difference between a young learner to an adult one.
Have a great day!
Aki~
Some people seem to confuse the future education and the digital technology.
>>> Some people seem to confuse future education and digital technology.
The role and influence of digital and analog types have different in education.
>>> The role and influence of digital and analog types are different in education.
Of course young generation should be learn how to use digital technology for their future life.
>>> Of course, the young generation should learn how to use digital technology for their future life.
But at the same time they need to learn how to feel emotions, how to communicate with others.
>> But at the same time, they need to learn how to feel emotions, and how to communicate with others.
AI and digital textbooks can\'t teach young students these things.
>>> CORRECT!
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