digital
학생이 쓴 원문
Digital world makes humans digital consumer more and more.
Whatever digital information and direction lead human\'s thought and role.
When human do anything before they practice, human ask digital or AI.
At finally human\'s ability become weaker and more vulnerable, AI become stronger and more powerful.
We should realize a sense of crisis.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Sadly, the number of people relying on AI is increasing, for education design and businesses. I heard one time a woman on social media complaining how AI was made for other people to generate an image that they learn a course for more than 4 years.
Thank you for this.
Aki~
Digital world makes humans digital consumer more and more.
>>> The digital world makes humans digital consumers more and more.
Whatever digital information and direction lead human\'s thought and role.
>>> Whatever digital information and direction lead humans\' thoughts and roles.
When human do anything before they practice, human ask digital or AI.
>>> When humans do anything before they practice, they inquire from digital apps or AI.
At finally human\'s ability become weaker and more vulnerable, AI become stronger and more powerful.
>> Finally, humans become weaker and more vulnerable, while AI becomes stronger and more powerful.
We should realize a sense of crisis.
>>> CORRECT!
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