Digital currency lead people to creditor.
학생이 쓴 원문
Digital currency lead people to creditor.
because many people use Digital currency(bit coin).
but digital currency was premature to alternate real money.
government digital currency is safe but digital currency that made a private is caution.
result : Digital currency need precaution now.
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Hi there Ari! It\'s true that digital currency is spreading in the whole world now. I just hope it will accelerate the development of a better financial system.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Digital currency lead people to creditors.
>>> CORRECT!
because many people use Digital currency(bit coin).
because many people use Digital currency(bit coin).
>>> Many people use Digital currency(bit coin).
but digital currency was premature to alternate real money.
but digital currency was premature to alternate real money.
>>> However, the digital currency was premature to alter real money.
government digital currency is safe but digital currency that made a private is caution.
result :
government digital currency is safe but digital currency that made a private is caution.
result :
>>> The government digital currency is safe but digital currency that is made privately is dangerous.
result : Digital currency need precaution now.
>>> The result is digital currency needs precautions now.
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