digital gifting
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays even in my case, I use digital gifting a daily.
I can show my sincerity and gratitude through digital gifting.
If that systems do not exist, I feel uncomfortable in relationship with others.
But owing to digital gifting platforms are too much convenient so at last we spend money easy and much than expected.
Digital platforms always give bad habits at the same time instead of giving convenience.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Unlike the platform or App we use in the Philippines, your digital gifting is more convenient. Personally, I hope to have such kind of innovation with the App we currently use. The article may mention Social obligation. I think it now depends on the person whom he/she will send the gift.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
Nowadays even in my case, I use digital gifting a daily.
>>> Nowadays, I also use digital gifting daily
I can show my sincerity and gratitude through digital gifting.
>> CORRECT!
If that systems do not exist, I feel uncomfortable in relationship with others.
>>> If those systems do not exist, I feel uncomfortable in relationships with others.
But owing to digital gifting platforms are too much convenient so at last we spend money easy and much than expected.
>> But owing to digital gifting platforms being too convenient so at last we end up spending more money easy and much than expected.
Digital platforms always give bad habits at the same time instead of giving convenience.
>> CORRECT!
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