digital things
학생이 쓴 원문
it is natural existing side effects on the other side of convenience.
When I heard this news, I concern many issues.
I am sure we can\'t understang difficult contents when we read e-books.
E-books have good adventage to skim reading lightly.
But professional , difficult and contents which we need to deep thinking are not suitable e-books type.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your thought and I agree in the sense that for easy to read contents, e-book isn recommended, other than that, we have to use physical or hardware books.
Aki~
it is natural existing side effects on the other side of convenience.
>>> It is natural to have existing side effects on the other side of convenience.
When I heard this news, I concern many issues.
>>> When I heard this news, I got concern many issues.
I am sure we can\'t understang difficult contents when we read e-books.
>>> I am sure we can\'t understand the difficult content when we read e-books.
E-books have good adventage to skim reading lightly.
>>>E-books have a good advantage to skim reading lightly.
But professional, difficult and contents which we need to deep thinking are not suitable e-books type.
>>> But for formal and difficult contents which we need to deep thinking are not suitable e-books type.
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