dinner with my family
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Well. Umm I can’t remember what we talked. But I can remember that what we ate. In last month my family and I went to Italian restaurant and ate some pizza. That restaurant interior is just normal, but you know what? That restaurants pizza taste is so good. Because it has very crispy bread part you know it’s called ‘dow’ and it has quite chewy cheese. I can’t forget that taste. I think me and my family talk about my university graduation issue but I can’t remember that much I think…umm..its because pizza is so great
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Hello Robin!
Remember to use articles such as \'a, an, the\' in your nouns. Read and repeat the correct sentences so it will be in your memory. Keep on practicing! :)
Remember to use articles such as \'a, an, the\' in your nouns. Read and repeat the correct sentences so it will be in your memory. Keep on practicing! :)
~T. Maine
>>Well, I can\'t remember what we talked about.
But I can remember that what we ate.
>>But I can remember what we ate.
In last month my family and I went to Italian restaurant and ate some pizza.
>>Last month, my family and I went to an Italian restaurant
That restaurant interior is just normal, but you know what?
>>The restaurant\'s interior is just normal, but you know what?
That restaurants pizza taste is so good. Because it has very crispy bread part you know it’s called ‘dow’ and it has quite chewy cheese.
>>The restaurant\'s pizza tastes so good because it has a very crispy bread which is the dough and it has quite chewy cheese in it.
I can’t forget that taste.
>>Correct.
>>OR: That taste was memorable.
I think me and my family talk about my university graduation issue but I can’t remember that much I think…umm..
>>I think my family and I talked about my university graduation, but I can\'t remember that much.
its because pizza is so great
>>It\'s because the pizza was so great.
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