Dinosaur
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite toy is dinosaur.
First, I like dinosaur very much and dinosaur toy looks real. So I buy many toy and fight with each others. Also dinosaurs mouth moves.
Second, I like big things. And dinosaur is big. And very scary. Like cars it\'s very small so l can\'t play long but dinosaur is interesting. and also big so l play with dinosaurs many times
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It is so wonderful to see you here on the composition page!
I think that dinosaurs are very cool and fun toys to play with because of their size and fierce look. I hope that you can show me some of your dinosaur toys in class next time!
Thanks for this answer to my questions! See you again soon!
Take care. ^^
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
First, I like dinosaur very much and dinosaur toy looks real.
>> First, I like the dinosaur very much and the dinosaur toy looks real.
So I buy many toy and fight with each others.
>> So I buy many toys and let them fight with each other.
Also dinosaurs mouth moves.
>> Also, the dinosaur\'s mouth moves.
Second, I like big things.
>> Correct!
And dinosaur is big. And very scary.
The dinosaur is very big and very scary.
Like cars it\'s very small so l can\'t play long but dinosaur is interesting. and also big so l play with dinosaurs many times
>> Like cars, it\'s very small so l can\'t play long but the dinosaur is very interesting. Also, it is big so l play with dinosaurs many times.
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