Dinosaurs!
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Dinosaurs have grass eating animal and flesh eating animal.
In grass eating animal, a typical dinosaur is Triceratops!
They eat grass and have protecting skin from flesh eating animal.
In flesh eating animal, a typical dinosaur is Tyrannosaurus!
They eat grass eating animal. So they have sharp teeth and sharp nail!
Dinosaurs have bird,too! It names Plerosaurs!
It flies sky! It also grass eating animal!
I think about dinosaurs today!
I can think their names!
Fore example, "triceratops, plerosaurs, etc.."
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Hello Sarah!
I\'m very happy that you\'re very knowledgeable about dinosaurs. :)
That\'s a good thing!
It means that you\'re also into science.
Just like me. :)
Anyway, I\'ll see you tomorrow!
Have a great evening!
~~T. Heidi ^-^
Dinosaurs have grass eating animal and flesh eating animal.
>>>There are two types of dinosaurs based on their meal. One is grass-eating and the other one is flesh-eating.
In grass eating animal, a typical dinosaur is Triceratops!
>>>Triceratops is an example of a typical grass-eating dinosaur
They eat grass and have protecting skin from flesh eating animal.
>>>They eat grasses and they have a protective skin from the flesh-eating dinosaurs.
In flesh eating animal, a typical dinosaur is Tyrannosaurus!
>>>Tyrannosaurus is a typical example of a flesh-eating dinosaur.
They eat grass eating animal.
>>>They eat grass-eating animals or herbivores.
So they have sharp teeth and sharp nail!
>>>That\'s why their teeth and nails are very sharp!
Dinosaurs have bird,too! It names Plerosaurs!
>>>There are bird dinosaurs too. Plerosaurs is an example of an aerial dinosaur.
It flies sky!
>>>It flies in the sky.
It also grass eating animal!
>>>It also eats herbivores.
I think about dinosaurs today!
>>>I am thinking about the dinosaurs today.
I can think their names!
>>>I know how to recognize their names.
Fore example, \"triceratops, plerosaurs, etc..\"
>>>For example. \"triceratops, plerosaurs, etc...\"
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