Disadvantages of getting tours
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I have experienced packaged tours three times. Unlike free travel, I had to move from attraction to attraction to the travel agent\'s lead. I was mainly sightseeing crowded tourist attractions with the other members with prescadualed itinerary. I had no enough time to enjoy local culture and their real lives. What\'s worse, I could rarely enjoy tracking or hiking. That\'s why I prefer traveling freely. Organizing my own itinerary and making reservations for flights or accommodations make me feel exited.
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Hi, GI [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework! I haven\'t tried traveling by booking flights with a travel agency, but I have tried touring a place by hiring a tour guide, and I must say, it wasn\'t for me. I agree with you! We only followed the guide throughout the trip, and it was very tiring. At some point, it was also nice because at least we didn\'t have to worry about where to go. Still, there were unnecessary stops at places we didn\'t like to visit.
- T. Caitlyn
I have experienced packaged tours three times.
>> CORRECT
Unlike free travel, I had to move from attraction to attraction to the travel agent\'s lead.
>> CORRECT
I was mainly sightseeing crowded tourist attractions with the other members with prescadualed itinerary.
>> I was mainly sightseeing in crowded tourist attractions with the other members with a pre-scheduled itinerary.
I had no enough time to enjoy local culture and their real lives.
>> I did not have enough time to enjoy the local culture and experience their real lives.
What\'s worse, I could rarely enjoy tracking or hiking.
>> What\'s worse, I could rarely enjoy trekking or hiking.
That\'s why I prefer traveling freely.
>> CORRECT
Organizing my own itinerary and making reservations for flights or accommodations make me feel excited.
>> CORRECT
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