Disadvantages of Technology

Hello Ariel!

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T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Technology makes our lives convenient but I think it makes human lazy. 

>> Technology makes our lives convenient but I think it makes humans lazy. 

Because we can do everything with our smartphones, we don\'t have go outside or move. 

>> CORRECT!

And when we don\'t move and exercise, our body will become unhealthy.

>> In addition, when we don\'t move and exercise, our body will become unhealthy.