Disadvantages of Telephone English
학생이 쓴 원문
Let's talk about the call in English today.
I began the telephone English for a month.
It is trying to say about the advantages and disadvantages.
First,the downside is not drastically improve the performance.
When taking a long-telephone English is somethimes complained about the effects.
Second,when I started,I motivated but will gradually become weak.
Third, Phone calls at certain times each day should be English.
It's not easy to keep a daily basis. For example, being moved or sick or an emergency might occur.
There are many advantages over the disadvantages Telephone English.
I would say the next time about advantages of telephone English.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about telephone English. Although you mentioned some of its disadvantages, I still hope that you will not stop from enhancing your grammar skills. You are a good student. We can talk more about how you feel in the class.
Anyway, have a great day!
Let's talk about the call in English today.
>> Let뭩 talk about phone English today.I began the telephone English for a month.
>> I am having telephone English for one month now.It is trying to say about the advantages and disadvantages.
>> I would like to talk about its advantages and disadvantages. First,the downside is not drastically improve the performance.
>> First, the improvement is not extensive.When taking a long-telephone English is somethimes complained about the effects.
>> I sometimes complain about the effects of having a long class.Second,when I started,I motivated but will gradually become weak.
>> Secondly, when I started phone English, I was motivated to study.Third, Phone calls at certain times each day should be English.
>> I should also speak English at certain times of the day.It's not easy to keep a daily basis. For example, being moved or sick or an emergency might occur.
>> It is not easy to study everyday, especially in emergency situations.There are many advantages over the disadvantages Telephone English.
>> But there are more advantages than disadvantages of telephone English.I would say the next time about advantages of telephone English.
>> I will talk about the advantages of telephone English next time.
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