Disadvantages of Telephone English

2011-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Let's talk about the call in English today. I began the telephone English for a month. It is trying to say about the advantages and disadvantages. First,the downside is not drastically improve the performance. When taking a long-telephone English is somethimes complained about the effects. Second,when I started,I motivated but will gradually become weak. Third, Phone calls at certain times each day should be English. It's not easy to keep a daily basis. For example, being moved or sick or an emergency might occur. There are many advantages over the disadvantages Telephone English. I would say the next time about advantages of telephone English.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about telephone English. Although you mentioned some of its disadvantages, I still hope that you will not stop from enhancing your grammar skills. You are a good student. We can talk more about how you feel in the class. Anyway, have a great day! Let's talk about the call in English today. >> Let뭩 talk about phone English today.I began the telephone English for a month. >> I am having telephone English for one month now.It is trying to say about the advantages and disadvantages. >> I would like to talk about its advantages and disadvantages. First,the downside is not drastically improve the performance. >> First, the improvement is not extensive.When taking a long-telephone English is somethimes complained about the effects. >> I sometimes complain about the effects of having a long class.Second,when I started,I motivated but will gradually become weak. >> Secondly, when I started phone English, I was motivated to study.Third, Phone calls at certain times each day should be English. >> I should also speak English at certain times of the day.It's not easy to keep a daily basis. For example, being moved or sick or an emergency might occur. >> It is not easy to study everyday, especially in emergency situations.There are many advantages over the disadvantages Telephone English. >> But there are more advantages than disadvantages of telephone English.I would say the next time about advantages of telephone English. >> I will talk about the advantages of telephone English next time.

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