Disappearing animals
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This question is stupid.
In conclusion, I don\'t think that animals are disappearing because people eat them.
There are several reasons why they disappear.
First, people killed animals because of their greed.
Second, ecosystem destruction is killing animals.
Third, too much pesticide is a reason.
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This question is stupid.
>>CORRECT!
In conclusion, I don\'t think that animals are disappearing because people eat them.
In conclusion, I don\'t think that animals are disappearing because people eat them.
>>CORRECT!
There are several reasons why they disappear.
There are several reasons why they disappear.
>>CORRECT!
First, people killed animals because of their greed.
First, people killed animals because of their greed.
>>CORRECT!
Second, ecosystem destruction is killing animals.
Second, ecosystem destruction is killing animals.
>>CORRECT!
Third, too much pesticide is a reason.
Third, too much pesticide is a reason.
>>CORRECT!
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