disasters of Japan

The disasters started last friday. I got surprised, when I read that news. There are lots of bodies who were victims of earthquake and thnami. A lot of people suffered from that disaster. They lost their houses and familes. The worldwidenews showed us that events when thnami was comming. It seems some kind of movies which described disasters of earthquake, volcano like that. But it was real. I thought about what did they feel when they knew that news. That situations even if they kenw when that thnami comes they didn't do anything. There are a lot of missing people and they are still looking for victims. To make matters worse, factories of nuclear explosion. I can't imagine the effect of explosion. It affects more than one generation. I really worried about Japan.

Hi [이름]. Here are some of the corrections I made with your composition. What happened in Japan is really devastating. I hope this kind of disaster will never happen again.

Lei J

The disasters started last friday.

>>correct

I got surprised, when I read that news.

>>correct

There are lots of bodies who were victims of earthquake and thnami.

>>There were lots of victims due to the earthquake and tsunami.

A lot of people suffered from that disaster.

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They lost their houses and familes.

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The worldwidenews showed us that events when thnami was comming.

>>The world-wide-news showed the events during the tsunami.