discipline
학생이 쓴 원문
We emphasize a civic and democratic attitude.
In some parts, my school educate very strong guidance and control about school bullying.
If some students violate these rules, they will be separated their classroom.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
These days, it\'s imperative to ensure thorough and stringent enforcement of anti-bullying measures. It\'s not about being harsh; rather, it\'s about safeguarding all children, irrespective of whether they\'re the bully or the victim.
Thank you for this. I appreciate your thoughts!
Aki~
We emphasize a civic and democratic attitude.
>>> CORRECT!
In some parts, my school educate very strong guidance and control about school bullying.
>>> In some parts, my school provides solid guidance and control over bullying.
If some students violate these rules, they will be separated their classroom.
>>> If some students violate these rules, they will be separated from their classroom.
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