Discribe an activity you liked in your childhood

My favorite part of childhood was playing with my best friends at school. At lunch hour break, we would run out onto the field for our favorite activity -dodge ball. Dodge ball is an easy game to learn. Two teams line up opposite of each other and run to take a ball off of a center line. Players must tag members of the other team by throwing balls at them. If a player is hit with a ball, they must sit out of the game. when one team gets all of the other team to sit out, the game is over. I really enjoyed those times, and sometimes I want to be that age again just so I can run around outside with my friends, having fun. After all of the years that have gone past, we are still best friends because we keep in contact with one another, and reminiscing with them makes me feel happy.

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My favorite part of childhood was playing with my best friends at school.

>>  My favorite childhood activity was playing with my bestfriends at school.

At lunch hour break, we would run out onto the field for our favorite activity -dodge ball.

>> At lunch break, we would run out to the field for our favorite game. It is called dodgeball.
Dodge ball is an easy game to learn.

>> Correct

Two teams line up opposite of each other and run to take a ball off of a center line

>> Two teams line up opposite of each other and run to pick up a ball off of a center line.

Players must tag members of the other team by throwing balls at them.

>> Correct

If a player is hit with a ball, they must sit out of the game.

>> Correct
When one team gets all of the other team to sit out, the game is over.

>> Correct
I really enjoyed those times, and sometimes I want to be that age again just so I can run around outside with my friends, having fun.

>> I really enjoyed those times and sometimes I want o go back to that age again, so I can run around outside with my friends and have fun.

After all of the years that have gone past, we are still best friends because we keep in contact with one another, and reminiscing with them makes me feel happy.

>> After all these years, we are still best of friends because we keep in touch with each other and reminiscing with them makes me feel happy.