Discribe an outdoor game you used to play.
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My family went to the ski resort. My daughter played ski on a high course. My husband and i were played ski on intermediate course. By the way , my daughter took dad to the high course. Dad is 60 years old. so he must be careful. Daughter was playing ski very well high course. . but Dad came down very hard. He finally fell down. I am always careful.
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Hello Lisa,
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
My family went to the ski resort.
>> Correct!
My daughter played ski on a high course.
>> My daughter played ski on a higher course.
My husband and i were played ski on intermediate course.
>> My husband and I played ski the intermediate course.
By the way , my daughter took dad to the high course.
>> By the way, my daughter took my dad to the higher course.
Dad is 60 years old.
>> Correct!
so he must be careful.
>> He needs to be careful.
Daughter was playing ski very well high course. . but Dad came down very hard.
>> My daughter likes to play on the higher course, but my dad was having trouble going down.
He finally fell down. I am always careful.
>> But then, he was able to go down and I always tell him to be careful.
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