Discrimination

2022-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have never felt discrimination yet,but I think I will feel discrimination when I go to abroad like eroupe. I think it will be very tired and sad to suffer discrimination.

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At some point in our lives, we can feel discrimination from other people but there is always a good way to properly handle it. These things should not affect us in a negative way but let it be something positive that can motivate us to become better people.

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I have never felt discrimination yet,but I think I will feel discrimination when I go to abroad like eroupe.

>>I have never felt discrimination yet ,but I think I will feel it when I go to places like Europe.

I think it will be very tired and sad to suffer discrimination.

>> I think it will be very tiring and sad to suffer from discrimination.

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