Discuss a place you would like to visit in the future.
학생이 쓴 원문
I wanna go to the amusement park in a Japan.
I heard the Mario amusement park is newly opened.
I like Mario since I was younger, so I want to go to the this place someday.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I hope you get to visit the amusement park in Japan soon. Thank you for sharing this.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I wanna go to the amusement park in a Japan.
>> I want to go to an amusement park in Japan.
I heard the Mario amusement park is newly opened.
>> I heard that the Mario amusement park has recently opened.
I like Mario since I was younger, so I want to go to the this place someday.
>> I have liked Mario since I was younger, so I want to visit this place someday.
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