Discuss the effects of homeschooling on children.
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Online study and work are quite familiar with people because of the corona virus pandemic. At the first time when school implemented the e-learning system, there were a lot of problem occurred such as possession of devices, the way using system and education contents.
Teachers have been suffering from preparation of education materials because they haven\'t recorded their lectures in online and they also had a technical problem in order to create the education contents. However, it looks like that system is stable and students adapted well than parents expected. But we still have a lot of problem from using e-learning system. Students can\'t focus on the lecture during class time, they would like to play a computer game or lie down on the bed. If there is a problem while they are using the system, students can\'t solve the problem by themselves. So, they need somebody\'s help, but most parents are working these days. We don\'t know how to solve these problem. Just hope end of pandemic soon.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Online study and work are quite familiar with people because of the corona virus pandemic.
>>> CORRECT
At first, when schools implemented the e-learning system, there were a lot of problem occurred such as possession of devices, the system and education contents.
>>> CORRECT
Teachers have been suffering from preparation of education materials because they haven\'t recorded their lectures online and they also had technical problems in order to create the education contents.
>>> CORRECT
However, it looks like that system is stable and students adapted well than what parents expected.
>>> CORRECT
But we still have a lot of problems from using e-learning system.
>>> CORRECT
Students can\'t focus on the lecture during class time, they would like to play a computer game or lie down on bed.
>>> CORRECT
If there is a problem while they are using the system, students can\'t solve the problem by themselves.
>>> CORRECT
So, they need somebody\'s help, but most parents are working these days.
>>> CORRECT
We don\'t know how to solve these problems.
>>> CORRECT
Just hope end of pandemic soon.
>>> Hoping for the pandemic to end soon.
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