Discuss the importance of kindness in daily life.
학생이 쓴 원문
Kindness is one of the good manners to socialize with other people.
It makes people having a good feeling and happy by itself.
So we don\'t hesitate to be kind to each other.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Kindness is one of the good manners to socialize with other people.
>> Kindness is an example of good manners when socializing with other people.
It makes people having a good feeling and happy by itself.
It makes people having a good feeling and happy by itself.
>> It makes people feel good and happy.
So we don\'t hesitate to be kind to each other.
So we don\'t hesitate to be kind to each other.
>> So, we shouldn\'t hesitate to be kind to each other.
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