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2021-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I often have lively and brief discussions with college students during lectures. The topic of lively and brief discussions is mainly theory of learning. By the way I have lengthy discussion time with my co-works on education, teaching methods, good parents, philosophy of life and others. Not long ago I had frank and lively discussions with my best buddy about what we will do in the future.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
I like your composition. 
It\'s short and snappy.
It definitely reflects your personal style.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I often have lively and brief discussions with college students during lectures.
>> Correct
The topic of lively and brief discussions is mainly theory of learning.
>> Correct
By the way I have lengthy discussion time with my co-works on education, teaching methods, good parents, philosophy of life and others.
>> In addition, I have lengthy discussions with my co-workers on education, teaching methods, good parenting, philosophy of life and others.
Not long ago I had frank and lively discussions with my best buddy about what we will do in the future.
>> Not long ago, I had honest and lively discussions with my best buddy about what we will do in the future.

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