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Frank discussion means people talk in a honest way. I had a frank discussion with a hr member of my company 1 month ago. And lively discussion means people trying to say actively and give many opinions about topics. Whenever we talk about the place to have company dinner, we have lively discussions. Brief discussion has opposite meaning to lengthy discussion which is short discussion. 2 weeks ago I had a brief discussion with my sister about buying a present to our parents. We had a brief discussion because she searched many things and suggested the best one. So we made decision very quickly.
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Frank discussion means people talk in a honest way.
>> A frank discussion means people talk in an honest way.
I had a frank discussion with a hr member of my company 1 month ago.
>> I had a frank discussion with an HR member of my company 1 month ago.
And lively discussion means people trying to say actively and give many opinions about topics.
>> A lively discussion means people trying to talk actively and give many opinions about topics.
Whenever we talk about the place to have company dinner, we have lively discussions.
>> Correct
Brief discussion has opposite meaning to lengthy discussion which is short discussion.
>> A brief discussion which is a short discussion has the opposite meaning to a lengthy discussion.
2 weeks ago I had a brief discussion with my sister about buying a present to our parents.
>> 2 weeks ago I had a brief discussion with my sister about buying a present for our parents.
We had a brief discussion because she searched many things and suggested the best one.
>> Correct
So we made decision very quickly.
>> So we made a decision very quickly.
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