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There are various foods in the world. Among them, the dish I want to learn the most is pasta. Because learning pasta is useful. My family often invites guests to my house, when my parents make pasta. So I would like to treat someone to my house with pasta someday. There are various kinds of pasta, so I can make it all if I learn basic methods.
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Hi Yeong! ^^
Wow that sounds good! I think everyone will like your cooking if you do that. :)
There are various foods in the world.
>> CORRECT
Among them, the dish I want to learn the most is pasta. Because learning pasta is useful.
>>Among them, the dish I want to learn the most is pasta because learning how to make it is useful.
My family often invites guests to my house, when my parents make pasta.
>> My family often invites guests to my house when my parents make pasta.
So I would like to treat someone to my house with pasta someday.
>> So I would like to treat someone with pasta when they come to my house.
There are various kinds of pasta, so I can make it all if I learn basic methods.
>>There are various kinds of pasta so I can make it all if I learn the basic methods.
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