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2020-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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I like to make pork and kimchi stew. Not only is it easy to make, but also the family loves it. I can not eat, but I also feel good when I see my family eating deliciously.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for diligently doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. Keep up the good work. ~T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

I like to make pork and kimchi stew.
>> I like making pork and kimchi stew the most.

Not only is it easy to make, but also the family loves it.
>> CORRECT

I can not eat, but I also feel good when I see my family eating deliciously.
>> I cannot eat them, but I feel good when I see my family eating my dish deliciously.

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