dishonesty
학생이 쓴 원문
Even though government make a good welfare system, there are some people to violating the law.
So we need a civil society.
When we can\'t trust each others all of us become victim.
Dishonesty corrupts society and us.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
There is an old saying that in a basket of good tomatoes, there will always be the rotten ones. Everywhere we go, we cannot see a perfect society, and I do not understand what is in the minds of these people; can\'t they be like others who obediently follow the law? Ahh, this is what we call individual differences.
Enjoy the rest of your day!
Aki~
Even though government make a good welfare system, there are some people to violating the law.
>>> Even though the government has a good welfare system, there are some people to violate the law.
So we need a civil society.
>>> CORRECT!
When we can\'t trust each others all of us become victim.
>>> When we can\'t trust others, all of us become victims.
Dishonesty corrupts society and us.
>>> Dishonesty corrupts society and all of us.
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