Dishonesty is somehow a gritty word to hear.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am playing well in PC room where is near at my house.
In these day, the new virus spread out.
So I can\'t go out freely and I am staying at my house doing nothing.
I played the violin alone.
And today the church was closed because of the patient who got the virus.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for expressing your thoughts. Keep it up!^_^
I am playing well in PC room where is near at my house.
>>> I am playing well in a PC room which is near from my house.
In these day, the new virus spread out.
>>>These days, a new virus is spreading out.
So I can\'t go out freely and I am staying at my house doing nothing.
>>>So, I can\'t go out freely and I am just staying in my house doing nothing.
And today the church was closed because of the patient who got the virus.
>>>Today, the church was closed because of the patients who got the virus.
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