Disobey
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Give a situation or two wherein it\'s fine or acceptable to disobey someone.
First, When a person force you to do something that it\'s not right(Like drinking alcohol), you have to disobey!
Second, When a person said to do something that you don\'t wanna do, you can disobey!
But when It is an advice or something, you should obey!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, [이름]! See you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Give a situation or two wherein it\'s fine or acceptable to disobey someone.
First, When a person force you to do something that it\'s not right(Like drinking alcohol), you have to disobey!
>> First, when a person forces you to do something that is not right, such as drinking alcohol, you have to disobey!
Second, When a person said to do something that you don\'t wanna do, you can disobey!
>> Second, when a person tells you to do something that you don\'t want to do, you can disobey!
But when It is an advice or something, you should obey!
>> But when it is some advice or something that\'s for your own good, you should obey! [We don\'t say \"an advice\" we say \"some advice\" or \"a piece of advice\" because advice is uncountable.]
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