Disparity between universities
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To relieve the disparity between universities depending on the regions, local governments and big companies try to create many jobs in the cities of countryside. And to improve the quality of education, regional universities should make much effort. The local or central governments have to deal with the regional disparities through financial subsidies or various events.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework! I agree with you! To lessen disparities between universities and encourage students to choose regional universities, equal opportunities for employment, subsidies, and quality education must be ensured.
- T. Caitlyn
To relieve the disparity between universities depending on the regions, local governments and big companies try to create many jobs in the cities of countryside.
>> To alleviate the disparity between universities in different regions, local governments, and big companies try to create more jobs in rural areas.
And to improve the quality of education, regional universities should make much effort.
>> CORRECT
The local or central governments have to deal with the regional disparities through financial subsidies or various events.
>> CORRECT
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