Do all of your friends have similar personalities?
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People are so different.
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Each person has his/her own personalities.
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Looking at my friends, they have diverse personalities.
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People might like the others who have different or opposite personalities from theirs.
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We all have traits that we don’t like about ourselves and want to change, but can’t.
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So when we see people who have different personalities from us can be appealing to us and they are the reasons why we make friends with them.
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However, to me, there are close and less close friends due to their personalities.
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I like a person who is humble, honest, not bluffing.
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So I have a much closer relationship with them rather than friends who are talkative too much.
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There is saying that birds of a feather flock together.
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People who have opposite personalities can make friends with each other and get along well.
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However, when it comes to marriage, I think that two people should have the similar personalities to have a happy marriage for a long time.
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