Do all of your friends have similar personalities?

2016-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

People are so different. Each person has his/her own personalities. Looking at my friends, they have diverse personalities. People might like the others who have different or opposite personalities from theirs. We all have traits that we don’t like about ourselves and want to change, but can’t. So when we see people who have different personalities from us can be appealing to us and they are the reasons why we make friends with them. However, to me, there are close and less close friends due to their personalities. I like a person who is humble, honest, not bluffing. So I have a much closer relationship with them rather than friends who are talkative too much. There is saying that birds of a feather flock together. People who have opposite personalities can make friends with each other and get along well. However, when it comes to marriage, I think that two people should have the similar personalities to have a happy marriage for a long time.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

Happy Friday. ^^

Thanks for your essay.

You did a great job. ^^

I am so happy that you made a perfect one. ^^

Have a great weekend and holiday.

Teacher Nina


People are so different.

>> correct

Each person has his/her own personalities.

>> correct

Looking at my friends, they have diverse personalities.

>> correct

People might like the others who have different or opposite personalities from theirs.

>> correct

We all have traits that we don’t like about ourselves and want to change, but can’t.

>> correct

So when we see people who have different personalities from us can be appealing to us and they are the reasons why we make friends with them.

>> correct

However, to me, there are close and less close friends due to their personalities.

>> correct

I like a person who is humble, honest, not bluffing.

>> correct

So I have a much closer relationship with them rather than friends who are talkative too much.

>> correct

There is saying that birds of a feather flock together.

>> correct

People who have opposite personalities can make friends with each other and get along well.

>> correct

However, when it comes to marriage, I think that two people should have the similar personalities to have a happy marriage for a long time.

>> correct

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