Do anything
학생이 쓴 원문
If I do anything today, I want to go to the bowling alley with my family
It\'s because spend the time withmy family and bowling is fun
And I want to cell phone game
It is because I like games and It\'s fun, too ^_^
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강사 첨삭
Please play bowling with me. I think I can beat you.
If I do anything today, I want to go to the bowling alley with my family
>> If I can do anything today, I want to go to the bowling alley with my family.
It\'s because spend the time withmy family and bowling is fun
>> It\'s because I like spending time with my family. Plus, bowling is fun.
And I want to cell phone game
>> And, I would like to have a smartphone.
>>OR: I would like to have a smartphone and smartphone games too.
It is because I like games and It\'s fun, too ^_
>> It is because, I like games and I think it is fun, too ^_^
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