Do children learn bad habits at school or at home?

2021-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I think both are applicable. To divide the probability, I think schools are higher than home. when children\'s young, bad friend meet in school. They learn a lot of bad behavior easily. on the other hand,Families are narrow in scope.

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Here are my corrections for you:


I think both are applicable.

>> CORRECT!
To divide the probability, I think schools are higher than home.
>> I think \"school\" has a higher percentage than \"home\".
when children\'s young, bad friend meet in school. They learn a lot of bad behavior easily.

>> When children meet their bad friend in school, they easily learn a lot of bad behaviors.

on the other hand,Families are narrow in scope.

>> On the other had, families also have a narrow scope in shaping good or bad behavior.

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