Do developed countries focus too much on luxury items? Do you think that luxury goods make people ha
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I totally agree with you Sir [이름].
Every person has a materialistic side.
There comes a point that we are not happy with what we have.
We usually ask for more. We should be satisfied and thankful for the things we have.
Tell me more about your ideas.
Teacher Nina
It depends on which country you are living in.
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Some developed countries focus too much on luxury goods, while others don’t.
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Most Korean people are trendy, fashionable and so sensitive to luxury items.
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Whereas Germans are more practical when it comes to spending.
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National character is different, although it is risky to generalize a few people’s behavior or view as the whole nation’s.
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Money or objects do not make us happy.
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Materialism is one of those ugly words that most of us don’t think about.
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However, no matter who you, it’s easy to get a little caught up in the idea of getting new stuff.
>> However, no matter who you are, it’s easy to get a little caught up in the idea of getting new stuff.
As a stereotype, a materialistic person is a high class one-percent snob whining about buying a Porsche instead of a Hyundai, but it’s something we’re all prone to.
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Whether it\'s a gadget you\'re coveting, or a brand you have to wear, we all have a bit of a materialistic side.
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However, it is important to realize that we\'re actually unhappy when we put too much value on material objects.
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