Do gender issues affect the development of a country?
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wow gender issues...
well these days in Korea there are too many gender issues.
we always fight each other, men and women.
especially in the internet, such a coward.
their topic is always idiot and foolish.
whenever i saw their umm.. discussion(honestly not) i always angry but also funny kekeke
their opinion and their accident is normally paradox
nothing to say about that.
it\'s like a march of fools.
ohh i ..was little excited haha
anyway relation to development is quite connected i think
cos looking in korea, there are a lot of only for women something
for example parking lot for woman, library, even subway section for women ha!
yes i am a man so i am a side of man. but this is ridiculous.
development of a country is changing for woman not for weaker just for woman.
there is something wrong on the top
i hope they realize as fast as they can
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Happy Monday [이름],
Yeah, let\'s start the new week with a challenging topic haha. Thanks for the reply to the homework you were given.
-Rachel
Well these days in Korea there are too many gender issues. we always fight each other, men and women especially in the internet, such a coward.
>> correct
>> These days, there are too many issues between men and women, and they always argue especially on the internet, so they are such cowards.
their topic is always idiot and foolish.
their topic is always idiot and foolish.
>> correct
whenever i saw their umm.. discussion(honestly not) i always angry but also funny kekeke
whenever i saw their umm.. discussion(honestly not) i always angry but also funny kekeke
>> Whenever I watch their discussion, honestly, I don\'t usually feel angry, but I actually think it;s funny.
their opinion and their accident is normally paradox nothing to say about that. t\'s like a march of fools. ohh i ..was little excited haha
their opinion and their accident is normally paradox nothing to say about that. t\'s like a march of fools. ohh i ..was little excited haha
>> Their opinions and actions are normally paradox, so I\'ve got nothing to say about that. It\'s like a parade of fools.
anyway relation to development is quite connected i think. cos looking in korea, there are a lot of only for women something. for example parking lot for woman, library, even subway section for women ha!
anyway relation to development is quite connected i think. cos looking in korea, there are a lot of only for women something. for example parking lot for woman, library, even subway section for women ha!
>> Anyway, for development. I guess in Korea there are more considerations for women. For example, there are parking lots for women and special areas in the library and even in the subway.
yes i am a man so i am a side of man. but this is ridiculous.
>> I am a man, so I usually take the side of men, but looking down on women is ridiculous.
development of a country is changing for woman not for weaker just for woman.
development of a country is changing for woman not for weaker just for woman.
>> The development of a country is changing for the women, not for the weak but for the women.
there is something wrong on the top. i hope they realize as fast as they can
there is something wrong on the top. i hope they realize as fast as they can
>> correct
>> There is something wrong on the top, so I hope they realize it as fast as they can.
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