Do hagwons widen the education gap between rich and poor students? How?
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In general, yes. indeed.
It has proportional relationship between the wealth and education.
Students who have rich parents could get more education opportunity. as a results, the gap of education become more widen.
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In general, yes. indeed.
It has proportional relationship between the wealth and education.
Students who have rich parents could get more education opportunity. as a results, the gap of education become more widen.
It has proportional relationship between the wealth and education.
Students who have rich parents could get more education opportunity. as a results, the gap of education become more widen.
In general, yes. Indeed, there is a proportional relationship between wealth and education. Students who have wealthy parents can get more educational opportunities. As a result, the education gap becomes wider.
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