Do historical movies need a costume review?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think it is necessary. We can promote our traditional costumes to people in other countries or to people in our country who have misunderstood the costumes. And also, if the testimony goes wrong, the moment you realize it, the movie\'s immersion is broken and the fun disappears.
강사 첨삭
Yes, I think it is necessary.
>> CORRECT
We can promote our traditional costumes to people in other countries or to people in our country who have misunderstood the costumes.
>> Movies can promote our traditional costumes to people in other countries and also to people in our own country who may misunderstand them.
And also, if the testimony goes wrong, the moment you realize it, the movie\'s immersion is broken and the fun disappears.
>> In addition, if the historical accuracy is wrong, viewers may notice it, which can break their immersion and reduce the enjoyment of the movie.
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