Do holidays have the same meaning for everyone, or does it depend on the person? Explain.

Hi, Mary! You did a good job explaining how holidays can feel different depending on a person’s job. I like how you gave a clear example with cafe and restaurant managers, it helps readers understand your point. Your reasoning shows you thought about both perspectives, which is excellent. To improve further, pay attention to small grammar and word choices, like “earn more money” (should be “earn more money”) and “make them work much harder” (could be “means they have to work harder”). Also, try to make sentences smoother by connecting ideas more clearly. Overall, your writing is clear, logical, and very understandable. Keep up the good work!

-Teacher Wela 

Most people take a break and work off on holidays.

>> Most people take a break and have time off on holidays.

However, some people work on holidays due to their job.

>> However, some people have to work on holidays because of their job.
For example, manager of cafe and restaurant need to open their shop because they might be earn more money on holidays.

>> For example, managers of cafes and restaurants need to open their shops because they might earn more money on holidays.
Of course, they close their shop if they want, but it\'s impossible unless they run a shop as a hobby.

>> Of course, they can close their shops if they want, but it’s usually impossible unless they run the business as a hobby.
 In their perspective, the holiday is more busy day and make them work much harder.
>> rom their perspective, holidays are busier days and require them to work much harder.